Entry: - Wednesday, April 07, 2004



well, it's over now.
the moon is down
and you're the farthest thing from me.
when you smiled the sun hid it's head in defeat
how can I stop loving you?
you ask for the impossible

but I'll try to do what you demand
though it pains me so.
I'll flash a forced smile
and put on this false facade of happiness
to hide the wreck that's inside.
just trying to do anything:

to pretend like you never broke my heart.

   9 comments

Ines
April 30, 2004   10:53 AM PDT
 
i like this one a lot!
alain
April 19, 2004   11:34 AM PDT
 
whos joann? is it a girl? which michelle?
Chimp
April 18, 2004   09:04 PM PDT
 
This is an artifact of creativity...its a really beautiful poem
namee
April 11, 2004   05:38 PM PDT
 
that was so beautiful.
joann
April 8, 2004   10:17 AM PDT
 
MARRY ME!!1!
Nanceee
April 8, 2004   01:09 AM PDT
 
Make it into a song, add some acoustic guitar-age and send it to Michelle as a demo
Mulan
April 7, 2004   10:08 PM PDT
 
yet again another AWSOME poem..im loving ur style
TheShortOne21990 AKA Mellers
April 7, 2004   09:33 PM PDT
 
wow this is weird lol im not used to it... i found your secret hideout too!! go me!!
alice
April 7, 2004   09:32 PM PDT
 
awww. you'd make joann proud. maybe.

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